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When I found you,
I found me
I was no longer alone
It's how it should be.
I was put together
With you here
Nothing could replace,
What I hold dear.
I see past the purple haze
I see the face confined
I know this isn't a phase,
I need to feel your skin on mine
We are the perfect puzzle
Time to be together
To make final amends,
"Now and forever."
Before the final battle
I hope you will agree,
When I say "I love you,
Tali'Zorah Vas Normandy."
I found me
I was no longer alone
It's how it should be.
I was put together
With you here
Nothing could replace,
What I hold dear.
I see past the purple haze
I see the face confined
I know this isn't a phase,
I need to feel your skin on mine
We are the perfect puzzle
Time to be together
To make final amends,
"Now and forever."
Before the final battle
I hope you will agree,
When I say "I love you,
Tali'Zorah Vas Normandy."
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Wow this is just... Incredible and amazing and very heart felt to every Tali 'Zorah fan out there! My self included. The ending was very powerful and you didn't let up at all. This tells why Tali, in my opinion at least, has the best romance plot because you can not see what she looks like. You have to judge her completely on personality so you're taking a leap of faith with her, and trust is the most important thing in a relationship. Once again excellent work and I hope you continue to make more work based on Tali and can't wait to see what you come up with next!